15.1 Text Analysis
When considering the change that language has gone through, an important aspect to see change is through the syntax of the author’s writing. At the beginning of the second paragraph where the author states, “Take care that you are never guilty of such a violation of good taste and correct judgment.” This order of wording more specifically when writing “Take care that…” Isn’t commonly understood since the phrase take care in present-day English would be what you would end a conversation with, not to start one. Syntactic change is a more common phenomenon that happens more frequently throughout random changes. A theory that further outlines this is the random fluctuation theory which suggests that language changes happen in a more random way, through the users of the language of course, but also through the received pronunciation and spread of misspelled or misspoken words being seen as common when first introduced to a learner. This makes odd syntactical changes that aren’t exactly “wrong English” more explicable.
Text B, a collocate chart that represents adjectives only for “taste” and “judgment” from the British National Corpus from 1980 to 1993, shows significant changes in the collocates as written in Text A. It is most notably changed in the juxtaposition of the collocates when reading “...such a violation of good taste and correct judgment.” Where one might fit into this more recent chart in saying “good taste,” “correct judgment” doesn’t make an appearance on this collocate chart. This would further the peculiarities of random fluctuations theory as two different words with two different meanings each with its own list of collocates change differently despite both being compared on the same timeline.
Text C, an n-gram graph for the phrases “are apt to be”, “are likely to be” and “tend to be” taken from a timeline of 1800 to 2008 shows higher increases in both “tend to be”, and “are likely to be”, as “are apt to be” dies out even though it was never really used even in earlier times. This hints back towards Text A once again in the author's writing of “...young men are apt to be guilty.” This change of lexis would bring the theory of lexical gaps to light. The theory of lexical gaps suggests that patterns in speech make mistakes in speech eventually in usable language. For example, in the spread of language, “apt to be” might have been mistaken for “ought to be.” This change in language could have been from dialects or just general miscommunication that was spread like a bad game of telephone. The change and shortening of the phrase is also explicable with the ideas of the infectious disease assumption which is that the uses of shorter and smaller words change from how lazy populations become, which make sense if we count the syllables in the phrases selected with the most popular phrase being the shortest of the three.
Hi John!
ReplyDeleteFor AO2, you received a level 3 with how you had come clear expression like when you said, ‘imitation, although probably linguistic, will also be imitated in nature as the advice would suggest’ shows that you had a clear idea of how the text along with having a buzzword in it. The content is relevant of what you said with you saying, ‘A theory that further outlines this is the random fluctuation theory which suggests that language changes happen in a more random way, through the users of the language of course’ as that shows that you were able to develop your idea about how language changed using the ‘fluctuation theory’.
For AO4, you received a level 4 with how you had buzz words throughout your blog like, ‘linguistic’, ‘syntactical’, ‘adjectives’, ‘collocate’, and ‘syntax’ along with you using the theories such as, ‘cultural transmission theory’, ‘random fluctuation theory’, and ‘lexical gap theory’ which all show your understanding of each of these texts.
For AO5, you received a level 4 with using the correct language data from all three sources being perfectly balanced as all things should be. With how you talked about Text A, Text B, and Text C all perfectly with them each getting their own paragraph. Plus the effective analysis of the language is great like when you said, ‘through the users of the language of course, but also through the received pronunciation and spread of misspelled or misspoken words being seen as common when first introduced to a learner’ having it feel effective towards the reader. You had some effective synthesis of evidence like in Text A you said, ‘Through the advice and wordage that the uncle used, the nephew will likely pick up on and continue to imitate’, then with Text B, ‘It is most notably changed in the juxtaposition of the collocates when reading “...such a violation of good taste and correct judgment.” ‘, and finally with Text C, ‘This change in language could have been from dialects or just general miscommunication that was spread like a bad game of telephone’ makes it all effective with your evidence being on point.
Great Job! 18/25
ReplyDeleteJohn,
For AO2,
Your Blog utilizes clear expression with content that is relevant and shows the development of clear ideas. There are occasional errors however they do not impede communication. The use of grammar, punctuation and spelling helps your blog clearly express ideas and describe the changes in language that you observe in the excerpt and the following texts. Your ideas are organized functionally and make your blog sound educated and specific to the observations of the changes in language.
⅗
For AO4,
Your Blog demonstrates a clear understanding of the texts and your observations make reference to specific linguistic issues and concepts and your inclusion of the random fluctuation theory and the Cultural Transmission Theory demonstrates your understanding of the linguistic changes taking place and the methods and approaches that can be applied to the excerpts and the texts. Your discussion of syntax, lexical gaps, and the collocate data contributes to your response but you neglect to discuss the implication of these terms in depth.
⅗
For AO5,
Your Blog has a ‘clear and appropriate selection of language and data from at least two sources’ and your analysis of data from the texts creates a clear purpose to your writing. When you briefly discuss the collocate chart in Text B and the N-gram graph and phrases, you graze the surface of how linguistics have evolved. Your analysis should include the lexis within the texts and theories applied to the texts’ change in language. Your analysis is surface level because of your explanations connecting the texts and terms to describe language change and you could improve your response by applying more lingual terms and theories such as specific word changes, social implications, and synthesis of evidence.
7/15
Hi John,
ReplyDeleteAO2 - 3 marks: Your blog used clear expression, and I didn’t see any really important errors in your writing. The correct use of grammar and spelling allowed your blog to flow smoothly. Your content is relevant and ideas are developed clearly. You did a great job listing some theories and tying them back into the text.
AO4 - 4 marks: Detailed understanding of and effective reference to linguistic issues, concepts, methods and approaches. For example, when you were talking about the cultural transmission theory, you explained how the nephew will most likely carry on the language used by his uncle in the letter.
AO5 - 9 marks: Clear and appropriate selection of language data from more than two sources. Clear analysis of language data. Clear synthesis of evidence from more than two sources of language data. You did a great job explaining the theories you used and using evidence from the text when tying them back. Overall, I think you did a great job writing this paper for the first time.
For AO2 I would give you a 4. Your writing was very easy to read and follow along with. I understand the points you made due to clear expression. Content was relevant.
ReplyDeleteFor AO4 I would give you a 4 since you had a wide understanding of different concepts and theories relating to language change. For example, you mentioned different aspects such as the cultural transmission theory, syntax, juxtaposition, and lexical gaps
For AO5 I would give you a 3. You quoted the text a good amount but there were a few good points made that lacked text/ explanations to support it. For example, your explanation of the cultural transmission theory lacked examples of words used that could be passed on and that have changed meanings.There was a good synthesis of evidence when explaining the language change between sources. For example, when explaining the n-gram of Text C, you said ‘This hints back towards Text A once again in the author's writing of …’
Total: 17/25